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~*~ You Float Away ~*~

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 11-01-1999 11:55 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

** This is going to seem depressing, but it's not really meant to be....it's just the reality of a long-distance internet love...

"Remember, I love you," I say...
I sign off and you float away -
I sit there and stare at the screen...
This love seems to be just a dream.

Our love is 2 world's far apart...
You now hold the key to my heart -
Long days turn to nights, oh so cold...
Crawl in bed - I have no one to hold.

Come to me tonight - meet me there...
Leave behind all the burdens we bear -
Take my hand - and let's disappear...
from this world - let's fly far from here.

Just a night with you in the stars...
Visit Venus & Saturn & Mars -
Ride a comet for Chris like he said...
How euphoric - this dream in my head.

We find a white castle up there...
In the sky - so we stop just to stare -
There on sand, with bare feet you kiss me...
Our sea - of tranquility...

We stop off to Waltz on the moon...
The way you move - makes me swoon.
You tenderly dip me with grace...
I reach up my hand, touch your face.

Strong arms lift me up higher still...
As we dance, there upon luna's hill.
Don't wake me - I want to stay here,
In the arms of the one I hold dear..........

"Remember, I love you," I say...
As I wake up & you float away -
I lay there & stare at the screen...
This love seems to be just our dream.



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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 11-01-1999 11:58 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This speaks volumes about your depths dear Lady, and says much about Michael's judgement as well.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Denise
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2 posted 11-02-1999 12:00 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Simply beautiful, PFF!

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Denise

Corinne
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3 posted 11-02-1999 12:09 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

dear fem,

Been there, done that...

Very difficult, very rewarding, very hard for anyone else to fathom...

Corinne
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4 posted 11-02-1999 12:20 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beauitful and so true, I dealt with this a little once myself

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Watcher666
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5 posted 11-02-1999 12:44 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Very lovely!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
poetFemmeFatale
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6 posted 11-02-1999 09:13 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Dream, am I right to take that as a compliment or not ? (laughing nervously) You spoke of my "depths", however, this piece was written quite "simplistically".....hehe Just wondering - -

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

Pepper
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7 posted 11-02-1999 09:36 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Oh, so very beautiful pFF....loved the imagery of this piece......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Iloveit
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8 posted 11-02-1999 09:41 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

yep loved this too, *sigh* it is beautiful
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 11-02-1999 09:45 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Pff,
A dream made in cyber space heaven.
You threw the dice and threw eleven.
You won.
WhtDove
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10 posted 11-02-1999 10:40 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Femme this was fantastic! This was just so tender. (((((sigh)))))
You guys will be together soon. I know its hard right now. Hang in there!
hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 11-02-1999 10:55 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

PFF....I can relate to this as so can many others. The distance between two hearts encompasses more than physical space. I know how it feels to feel that longing to be in that persons arms...sometimes the sheer magnitude is overwhelming
Richard 33
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12 posted 11-02-1999 12:36 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Femme, this is a wonderful piece of poetry,
I think, it shows how deep your feelings
for Michael really are, it shows that you are human, just like us all, and also shows that
you show more feeling, than most in this
world!!! My dear friend femme all I can say
is someday you will be with the one you hold
dear, It will amaze you the distance love
will span!!!


Flowers to ya my friend.

Richard

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 11-02-1999).]
tori
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13 posted 11-02-1999 12:46 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

The magic of love has no boundres as your words have shown truth to this fact
This was beautiful Fatale!!
Michael
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14 posted 11-02-1999 12:56 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Your dreams are my dreams, Femme, and they can come true. Always remember, I love you.
I am as honored by your poetry as I am by your love, thank you for sharing so much with me. I hope I haven't let you down, completely, some how.


Michael
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15 posted 11-02-1999 12:59 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme


And it is beautifully expressed.
Richard 33
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16 posted 11-02-1999 01:03 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Amen
RSEvans
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17 posted 11-02-1999 01:12 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

The farther the distance sometimes the stronger the love. This simple poem actually says a lot, sis.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.
poetFemmeFatale
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18 posted 11-02-1999 01:58 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Thank you Richard, for the flowers...you brought a smile to my face once again...I needed that.

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

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19 posted 11-02-1999 02:01 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Beautiful, PFF!
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