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I Think He's Gonna Die

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Ohme
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0 posted 11-01-1999 11:42 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ohme

I Think He's Gonna Die

He was so very faithful,
Been so loyal all these years.
He's seen a lot of laughter
and we shared a lot of tears.
He always did my bidding,
never questioned my intent.
And when I told him where to go,
he always gladly went.
But now it seems he's taken ill,
I sigh and then I moan.
I think he's gonna die
and I'll be left here all alone.
Tomorrow's gonna be another
sad day at my house
until I go and buy myself
another puter mouse!



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I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day!
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Denise
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1 posted 11-01-1999 11:49 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Cute! Lots of great bargains out there now too!

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2 posted 11-02-1999 01:15 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

You had me ready to cry....until the end.Cute!

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Ohme
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3 posted 11-02-1999 09:03 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Thanks Denise, . And you can bet I'll be looking for a bargan. This one is just all but gone. Tried to clean him up but to no avail.

Thanks, Watcher. It is sad. I was almost in tears over the little rodent while I wrote it. It gets frustrating.

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JennyLee
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4 posted 11-02-1999 09:05 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

LoL Ohme...like this very much...poor puter mouse

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LOL Ohme......very clever expression!
May he rest in peace....g......

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hoot_owl_rn
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LOL
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7 posted 11-02-1999 09:43 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

LOL - You know, I wasn't gonna read this at first, I even skipped over it a couple of times because I thought it was gonna be real depressing...and of late, I've had enough of that on my own (sigh) however, I decided to stop and read, and am so glad I did !! LOL What a funny little twist at the end ! I liked this alot - - thanks for the smile !

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Ohme
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Thanks, Jenny, Pepper, Hoot.
I made a deliberate effort to pull a switcheroo on this one. If the chuckle came through the back door, I accomplished my intent.

PFF, glad you stopped in for a .
Even more pleased that I gave you a when you were not expecting it.
WhtDove
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9 posted 11-02-1999 10:23 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well you certainly accomplished what you set out to do. I thought it might have been an animal such as a dog or something. Then it turns out as your puter mouse. Very good twist there. LOL
RainbowGirl
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10 posted 11-02-1999 10:38 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Fancy a live one? I just rescued one from the cat...LOL...Not sure it would ever stay in one place long enough to be useful though..*g*

HUSG

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