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An Unpoetic Poem Because it Felt Appropriate

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Severn
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0 posted 11-01-1999 08:14 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Severn

Needed to remove this at this time.
Sorry.

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 11-05-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-01-1999 08:24 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Severn and quite poetic!

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Denise

Severn
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2 posted 11-01-1999 09:36 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

You think so? Cool! Thanks denise.
WhtDove
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3 posted 11-01-1999 09:41 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Her throbs for Christopher. I love it Severn, great one, no ryhme needed.
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 11-01-1999 09:43 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Severn...this is wonderful. It flows so smoothly like a gentle stream to the very end. I think it's great. Now take your bow
Watcher666
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5 posted 11-01-1999 09:44 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

One of the most beautiful poems I have ever seen.Very well done!!

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Systematic Decay
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6 posted 11-01-1999 09:44 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

AWWWW!!!!

How lovely.....so heartwarming!

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Denise
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7 posted 11-01-1999 09:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yep, yep, yep!

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Denise

Thunder Moomba
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8 posted 11-01-1999 09:50 PM       View Profile for Thunder Moomba   Email Thunder Moomba   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Thunder Moomba

This is a pretty great poem Severn

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Ohme
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9 posted 11-01-1999 10:20 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Beautiful.
Lynn
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LOVELY!!!! & BEAUTIFUL!!!!

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Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
Pepper
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11 posted 11-01-1999 11:00 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

So very beautiful Severn.....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Julie
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12 posted 11-02-1999 12:29 AM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Definately a song of the soul. Purely poetic.

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Julie
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Isis
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13 posted 11-02-1999 01:02 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

You spoke volumes, don't need rhyme or reason, the love you have and you portrayed is enough

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Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


 
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