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Corinne
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state of confusion


0 posted 11-01-1999 07:26 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corinne


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It gave you pleasure
Melting my resistance
Shining in the sparkle
You found in my eyes
Twinkling treasure

Partially hidden from view
Wrapped in glossy paper
You tore away
Layers of ribbons tied
I loved you

Held this gift in your gaze
Touched the outer layers
Slipped inside skillfully
Heat replaced the cold
Closed my eyes, milky ways

I have often wished upon you
Like some far off star
In the icy winter sky
And I think to myself:
Darlin’, if you only knew

© August 1999 Corinne Bailey


© Copyright 1999 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


1 posted 11-01-1999 08:15 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Nice....really beautiful.....LOL when I said keep 'em comin, I didn't mean so many at a time...i suppose you weren't told this yet, but it is generally frowned upon to post so much at a time...perhaps if you spent more time replying...personally, I post no more than one or two, sometimes three poems in a day-usually spread about in seperate forums. Perhaps try to get in at least 3 replies for every poem posted. (And that is an absolute minimum!)

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Denise
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2 posted 11-01-1999 08:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Simply beautiful, Corinne.

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Denise

Alwye
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In the space between moments


3 posted 11-01-1999 10:11 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

definitely beautiful..you're a welcome addition here.

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"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

Mike
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4 posted 11-01-1999 10:41 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Very nice.
Lynn
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5 posted 11-01-1999 10:52 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


Corinne....Truely beautiful!


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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
Corinne
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6 posted 11-01-1999 11:30 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Dear Systematic Decay,

So sorry! I am a very literal person, and one with not much time, either, I'm afraid!
So, I have posted several at a time, when I have the time...

I have been posting commentary, but there are so many postings, it is hard to keep up.


I will try to control my enthusiasm!

Corinne
Watcher666
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7 posted 11-02-1999 01:19 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
 
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