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Corinne
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0 posted 11-01-1999 07:08 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corinne

Green Flash

Dreams of a scarlet sunset
Steamy salty spray of sea
Green flash on pink horizon
Scotch mist drifts over me

Ten toes curl, cold wet sand
You emerge, young and strong
Shiny sprinkles, sapphire sequins
Slow pulsing beat, a sirenís song

Emerald eyes, flaxen hair
I have seen you here before
Riding the waves gracefully
Running along the shore

Shy smile, a silly girl again
Crushed by sea-and-sky eyes
Touch of the hand quickly
Takes me by surprise

Lifts me, sweet ease of youth
Falling in, cool soft, velvety
We tumble like tossed stones
Kiss undersea kiss again

Mystical man returned to the sea
Loved you, but too naÔve to know
So forgive my reminiscing
When bitter winter winds blow

© 1999 Corinne Bailey


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Verma
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1 posted 11-01-1999 07:14 PM       View Profile for Verma   Email Verma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verma

Very nice piece Corinne - I enjoyed the read
Denise
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2 posted 11-01-1999 09:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Such sweet rememberings. I love the sea and you have described it vividly.

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Wonderful use of alliteration, a pleasure to
read. Thanks!
Watcher666
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Nicely done!

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