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Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

0 posted 1999-11-01 06:33 PM


Have you walked into this garden?
Have you tarried by this stream?
Have you bathed in this blue twilight?
Or glimpsed but in a dream.

Have you thought upon the future?
Have you dwelt upon the past?
Have you contemplated mysteries?
Afore comes the end of the path.

Caressing breezes stir
to lie together in this hill
Bathed in soft sweet moonlight
Gently glowing still.

Embracing warmth surrounds
As branches rustle low.
Life beats a chord around you
if only you but know.

Within each soul a fragment
burns of Ancient Savage race.
Within each heart there glows
a touch of everlasting grace.

Within each mind there does abide
a vision yet to be.
Within each eye from deed inside
reflects eternity!


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~


© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-01 06:35 PM


Liked this much!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-11-01 09:21 PM


Beautiful, Echo. Very beautiful!

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Denise


Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
3 posted 1999-11-02 01:38 AM


Thank you Watcher and Denise!


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~


WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 1999-11-02 05:19 PM


Sweet One, this belongs on top! Absolutely beautiful, warm and tender! Fantastic work!
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2004-04-25 09:59 PM


beautiful....would love for you to come back around
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