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Judas
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Untitled

I have waited
for the day
that never came.
Like a flower
without the rain,
our love was left
to wither away
in the harsh misery
of an unending day.

© Copyright 1999 Judas - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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Liked the analogy here.All things need tending or they die.Nicely done.

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Very well written analogy....I enjoyed
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