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Systematic Decay
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0 posted 11-01-1999 05:51 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Systematic Decay

A red rose glimmers from morning dew
The sunlight filters through delicate skin
Silhoueting veins it cannot pass through
I'm drunk on the beauty, thoughts are aspin

My wistful heart says love someday must win
That our doves aren't lost in infinite skies
But my dreams are dilluted once again
And I am bewildered, lost in the "why's"

A tear slips out to a God I despise
He stole your presence from this dismal earth
You were an angel, a star in disguise
A destined savior from your very birth

This morning I put this rose on your grave
A small thank you for my life you did save

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


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Watcher666
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1 posted 11-01-1999 06:13 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
suicidal dreams
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2 posted 11-01-1999 06:15 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

Beutiful dear Amy i loved reading it quite a bit.

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Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


3 posted 11-01-1999 07:41 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Thank you watcher, and Tom.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 11-01-1999 08:21 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Systematic....this was beautifully written. I loved the imagery and the message was so sad, but well worded
Corinne
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5 posted 11-01-1999 11:34 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Very Poignant, Systematic, it is sad when we lose someone we love, we lose a part of ourselves and the world seems a little less bright...


Corinne
Systematic Decay
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6 posted 11-02-1999 08:01 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

thank you Ruth and Corrine

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


 
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