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Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-11-01 05:51 PM

A red rose glimmers from morning dew
The sunlight filters through delicate skin
Silhoueting veins it cannot pass through
I'm drunk on the beauty, thoughts are aspin

My wistful heart says love someday must win
That our doves aren't lost in infinite skies
But my dreams are dilluted once again
And I am bewildered, lost in the "why's"

A tear slips out to a God I despise
He stole your presence from this dismal earth
You were an angel, a star in disguise
A destined savior from your very birth

This morning I put this rose on your grave
A small thank you for my life you did save

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-01 06:13 PM

Lovely.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

2 posted 1999-11-01 06:15 PM

Beutiful dear Amy i loved reading it quite a bit.

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life is short kill quick

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-11-01 07:41 PM

Thank you watcher, and Tom.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-11-01 08:21 PM

Systematic....this was beautifully written. I loved the imagery and the message was so sad, but well worded

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

5 posted 1999-11-01 11:34 PM

Very Poignant, Systematic, it is sad when we lose someone we love, we lose a part of ourselves and the world seems a little less bright...

Corinne

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

6 posted 1999-11-02 08:01 PM

thank you Ruth and Corrine

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

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