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Grieving

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RobertB
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0 posted 11-01-1999 05:41 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

Bleeding Heart


When the bleeding
of the heart
is washed away
by tears
and the grieving ends
then life,
as suddenly as it stopped,
begins again.


RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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Severn
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1 posted 11-01-1999 08:06 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

One would like to think so.
Short and very sweet.
Denise
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Yes, when the grieving ends. Nicely done.

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Denise

RobertB
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yep....you have to grieve first

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WhtDove
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You've said a mouth full with few words. Very well said my friend! You're right, we do have to greive first.
hoot_owl_rn
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Wow, so few words, so much said...nicely spoken
Watcher666
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I would love to believe this...nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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does it?
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