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wannabe_poet
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0 posted 11-01-1999 02:35 AM       View Profile for wannabe_poet   Email wannabe_poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wannabe_poet

As I see you from a distance
My heart begins to race
Knowing that I have longed
To see your beautiful face.

As you are getting closer
I say to myself 'today I will say hi'
But I just stare at you, lost in your eyes.
As you pass me by
I cannot utter that one simple word
And I just don't know why

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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 11-01-1999 02:37 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

its a good first post i hope to see your progress
wannabe_poet
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2 posted 11-01-1999 02:50 AM       View Profile for wannabe_poet   Email wannabe_poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wannabe_poet

Actually wayoutwalt this is the third or fourth that I have posted here. The others have been done last month.

Watcher666
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3 posted 11-01-1999 05:19 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely Done!

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