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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-11-01 01:02 AM



There is an end,
There is a light at the end of the tunnel,
Things are oh so clearer now,
No more being sucked down the funnel.

I'm walking on air so full of laughter and loving,
I can't even stop this high if I tried,
I'm happy to be here among the living,
Not wishing that I'd died.

You'll all be sick of me,
With so many postings today,
And Isis' lack of self confidence?
Why, that was only heresay.

I feel so confident, don't care what anyone says or think,
If only I could bottle this confidence?
It'd be one hell of a drink!
Does all this make any sense?

I don't even care if it doesn't!!,
I'm floating in a sea of contentment,
Which I have only glimpsed for many a day,
And I know it's heaven sent...

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
1 posted 1999-11-01 02:15 AM


Hey bottle the drink and pass some on to me OK, I could use it! And yes, it all makes sense...to me at least! I like this and I give ya 2 thumbs UP


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-01 05:33 PM


Thanks so much Echo, it is there inside of all of us..just have to sort through the debris to find it

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



amber
Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240
los banos, ca,
3 posted 1999-11-01 07:00 PM


it's nice to see you so positive today isis! i have to admit that i think i've found someone to make me smile again- shh...i'm glad everything is going so well for you, your poem expresses it all. much love.
devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
4 posted 1999-11-01 07:02 PM


your going to laugh about this one, but my sister amber lives with me and i forgot to change the name when i got online! hope you catch that. ha ha
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-11-01 09:55 PM


Those 'high' times can be wonderful! Made more so by those 'down' times, don't ya think?! Glad you're feeling so grand!

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Denise


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-11-02 12:18 PM


Glad I could make you smile Amber That's what it's all about - sharing the feelings.
Thanks also Devina you have confused me!!
Thanks too Denise

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

7 posted 1999-11-02 12:46 PM


Liked this much!!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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