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What i deserve...

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The Jackal
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0 posted 10-31-1999 10:14 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

we all get exactly what we deserve
dont confuse your emotions
for words
as i alienate the people that care
i find no love
from what lies out there
and i cant appologize enough
the best freinds i ever had
told me to be happy
to try to be glad
that im living
that all this can be so good
i was blind
it took a wild night
losing myself in a bottle
to understand what ive lost..
what id only give for another chance
but its too late..
never trust something as foolish
as fate
for you make your own..
i blew it all away..now alone
is my night
is my day..




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Denise
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1 posted 10-31-1999 10:32 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Unfortunately, some lessons are hard learned.
You have expressed this very well.


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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 11-01-1999 10:20 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nice wording on this one
Saxoness
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3 posted 11-01-1999 02:39 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

good job, loved the fate line!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Watcher666
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4 posted 11-02-1999 05:07 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done!

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