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M.A.R.I.L.Y.N. Doulble acrostic

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Richard 33
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0 posted 10-31-1999 10:07 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Richard 33

M y feelings (I) have for you are sincere.

A lways I (WANT) to be there for you.

R eady always (TO) be your help.

I want to (MAKE) your life so much better.

L earning together (YOU), and I makes me shine.

Y our (HAPPY) *S* I can see in your words.

N ever to hurt you (AWAYS, AND FOREVER).
© Copyright 1999 Richard 33 - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-31-1999 10:15 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

To tell you the truth...I liked this poem...and had just gotten into it- And it ended!!! Too abruptly, might I add.....

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2 posted 10-31-1999 10:28 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

She is so deserving of this too Nicely done
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3 posted 10-31-1999 11:36 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I just don't know what to say.
Richard 33
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4 posted 11-01-1999 12:59 AM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Thank you all so much for your replies!!!

Marilyn, this piece is very special, just as
you are to me. *kotc* *S*
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5 posted 11-01-1999 11:21 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I am just glowing with happiness here, Richard!
You are a wonderful person, but how fabulously bright you shine when you're *smitten* by someone as lovely as she !!

Marilyn, just in case you are wondering, I know Richard - and he has got to be one of the most sincere and *mature* men I have ever known!! He is genuine with a capital *G*.......I believe your heart would be safe with him - he hurts no one, and is very forgiving when hurt. He has been a friend to me and stood by me, when no other man would in his position. That's how I know he is sincere about his friendships and relationships...He is a dear friend of mine, and I know how crazy he is about YOU !!! I wish you two the bestest of best luck!

BTW Richard - this acrostic was wonderful, and I know very appreciated.....

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

Richard 33
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6 posted 11-01-1999 02:08 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

I would like to take the opportunity to thank
everyone that responded!!!!

Thank you so very much femme, you are a dear friend, and I thank you for your reply.
In life we are acquainted with many, but so
few are true true friends!!!!!!!!


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7 posted 11-01-1999 03:17 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Very sweet poem Richard....good luck to you both......

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Richard 33
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8 posted 11-01-1999 03:20 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Thanx very very much for the kind words!!!!


*S*
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9 posted 11-01-1999 05:01 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Good to know there are such as you Sir Richard.
Richard 33
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10 posted 11-01-1999 09:11 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Thanks Andrew, your reply is much appreciated!!
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11 posted 11-01-1999 09:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice one, and such a wonderful expression of your love.

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Denise

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12 posted 11-01-1999 09:28 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Awwww....this is so sweet!!!

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Marilyn
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13 posted 11-01-1999 09:44 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Whooooaaaa!!! Richard already knows how I feel and where I stand but I need to say this for the rest of you. I think Richard as very special and sooo sweet, he is my friend and I value him.

What I have a problem with is LOVE!! Denise's reply totally threw me back a few paces. This is NOT love. How can it be? We have read eachothers work and have talk several times on line. There is an attraction but LOVE is something completely different. Besides which, I am so petrified of love I freeze up. I wish I could feel the way Richard wants me too but I can not (at this time anyway). Push this too hard (Richard or anyone else) and I will guarentee I will run so fast you'll hardly see my dust.

I am sorry if this sounds harsh. It wasn't intended to, I just needed you all to know my position.
Richard 33
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14 posted 11-02-1999 12:53 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Sweetie, let me put this as simple as I can,
I am attracted to you, and are growing to
care for you, (no pressure) *WHEN*, and *IF*
Love happenes will only be when.
****(THE TIME IS RIGHT)****!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I care about you Marilyn, and DO NOT, want to scare you away!!!!!!!

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 11-02-1999).]
Richard 33
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15 posted 11-02-1999 01:12 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

One other thing, this poem is not
an expression of love , it is one of
admiration, and attraction, I am
tryind to show Marilyn that I believe
In her as a person, I'm trying to help her
find herself, so that maybe someday
she can love me, "key word" someday.

Richard
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16 posted 11-02-1999 02:12 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Richard....I did not mean to suggest that I took this poem the wrong way but I believe others did. I know, you and I know where we stand on this issue. I too value your friendship and caring. You are a very special person my friend..*S*
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17 posted 11-02-1999 06:50 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Marilyn, you voiced your feelings quite well on this point. When the time is right, it will happen. I believe Richard to be quite patient and willing to be there in the capacity of a friend for you until you decide you want something more. Perhaps he is "the one", perhaps not, but that is for you alone to decide and no one else.

Richard, take care of this one, she is a special person.
Ruth
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18 posted 11-02-1999 07:26 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Ohhhh if you two could only know... LOL I read all of your replies, and cant help but laugh a little because I had to look twice at the names next to your replies to each other and make sure they werent Mine and Somebody elses!!!! LOL If you guys could read my ICQ history file, you would both laugh sooo hard I am in the EXACT same boat right now but PATIENTS I tell you... Richard, our position is one of the hardest to be in. Patients is the key (I hope) LOL Great work, by the way.

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Richard 33
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19 posted 11-02-1999 08:50 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

There is no problem, for I understand, I have been in the same boat as she!!!!!

Marilyn don't worry everything is ok.

Ruth I certainly will take good care of Marilyn, Whether it's like a friend, or as my love someday, I would prefer boath if I am lucky.
poetFemmeFatale
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20 posted 11-03-1999 01:08 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

hehe I'm sorry too...I might have gone overboard with my first response, however, I didn't mention "love"....I just know that Richard is very fond of you....he is a wonderful man, and whether you two are friends or whatever, I know he indeed feels very lucky....I see his smiles all the way from here! That's all....I don't want to say anything to scare off Marilyn...I saw her reply to Michael....(sigh) Yes, I know with love comes many many "what if's"....but you never know if you don't give it a shot....

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Richard 33
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21 posted 11-03-1999 11:01 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

So true my friend so true.
 
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