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Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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state of confusion

0 posted 1999-10-31 10:00 PM


Illusion

This lover was so unlikely
Eloquent and unbound
Caressing so softly the
Secret place he had found

Lush grass bed, verdant trees
Star jasmine’s saccharine scent
Blue the moon, balmy breeze
Our frantic fervour was spent

No one else about to hear
Quiet early morning hours
Echos of sighs, my inner ear
Displayed again his prowess

Awakened by musical birds
Sultry sun bright and high
Tried to recall tender words
No matter if they were all lies

© 1999 Corinne Bailey



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Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
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That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-10-31 10:03 PM


Another great one! I think I can relate to this one....in different ways.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-02 04:02 PM


Enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-11-02 08:20 PM


Very nice, Corinne!

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Denise


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