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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-10-31 09:55 PM


Brown eyes
Deep tar pits
Crushing hands
Withheld tears
I ignored a me I deplored

Rusty blades of grass
inferno of rage
Gritting teeth
Shunning emotions
A nonexistant pill was the tool to fulfill

Icy
Numb
Spicy
Dumb
All alone surrounded by clones

I wanted to die
To fry
In eternal hells
Licked by envious fires
Beaten by desire

This is nothing important
Just a flow of ideas
memories
Clouds
Corpses that point at me....

Nothing anyone could ever understand

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



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Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
1 posted 1999-11-01 02:20 AM


G.M.A.C.T.U.A.I.W...And that's all I will say...for now!


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~


suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
2 posted 1999-11-01 06:18 PM


I dont know this is a bit dark sure you posted it in right forum .
BUT anyhow great read here.

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life is short kill quick

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-01 06:23 PM


Enjoyed the read.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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