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I'm just dealing with the pain

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Isis
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0 posted 10-31-1999 06:51 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I'm left all alone today,
You are back at work,
Feeling crushed and alone,
Feeling like a jerk.

You are over the blow up,
All is fine for you,
But with me it runs deeper,
There's hurting through and through.

It's the last thing I thought of,
Before I went to bed,
This morning it's the first thing on my mind,
So many things left unsaid.

How can you doubt I love you,
After all we have been through?
But there is pain on both sides honey,
What are we to do?

I'll tell you what to do,
Edit thoughts and feelings,
Edit those painful attacks,
They might make you feel better, to me they just send me reeling.

So please my love, the only way this will work,
Is to push aside the negatives,
ANd make the most of all we do have,
And fill our lives with the postivies.

I'm dealing with this the best that I can,
So sick of hurt, pain and grief,
I always feel so alone,
It's a darkness beyond belief.


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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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Denise
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1 posted 10-31-1999 07:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well written, Isis. Once again, hope things are better soon.

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Denise

WhtDove
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2 posted 10-31-1999 07:34 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Sad, sad, sad my friend! Hope things will get better soon. Sounds like the two of you need to sit down and have a heartfelt chat with eachother.
Isis
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3 posted 10-31-1999 07:42 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Thanks again Denise
And WhtDove as you know we did have the talk, but I feel fragile and shattered for a day or two afterwards. Thanks

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Ohme
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4 posted 10-31-1999 07:46 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme


Hang in there Isis, Nice poem.

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I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day!
Isis
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5 posted 10-31-1999 07:56 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I'm hanging on fine, thanks Ohme

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 10-31-1999 08:17 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Hang in there girl
Isis
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7 posted 11-01-1999 12:36 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I have and will continue to do so thanks Hoot

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Severn
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8 posted 11-01-1999 07:59 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Hugs Isis.
Watcher666
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9 posted 11-02-1999 03:32 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

*Hugs*

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Isis
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10 posted 11-02-1999 10:56 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

(HUGS) right back at you Severn and Watcher

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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