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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-10-31 06:37 PM



When will there be ending,
To all this grief and pain?
When oh when will you stop arguing,
And learn to smile again?

I can't live like this everyday,
With all the hurt, anger and viciousness,
You said it's you that does all the trying,
To me it feels like I am and I get is unhappiness.

I just want the hurt for both of us to end,
I want to smile and laugh with you again,
I want to find security and safety with you,
Not battle on alone until the end.

So please, please I am begging you,
Push the hurt aside,
And embrace your family again,
Cos that is where the love does hide.

It's supposed to be us three against the world,
Instead I feel it's me, myself and our son,
Think of us all not just yourself,
When that happens only good things will come.


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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-10-31 06:46 PM


Sad one here Isis! Well said. Look past all this and you will see me...nice message!
Denise
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2 posted 1999-10-31 06:51 PM


Another sad one I hope the pain ends soon.

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Denise


Isis
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3 posted 1999-10-31 07:00 PM


Thanks WhtDove (HUGS) that is so beautiful a response, I'm glad I can look past it at my friends. (HUGS) again. Guess what lady, you made my day
And thanks Denise also

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
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4 posted 1999-10-31 07:03 PM


Isis: Wish I could make things change for you but I can't but if wishing could...

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Isis
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5 posted 1999-10-31 07:16 PM


Thanks also RainbowGirl, if wishes came true... I know you'd help if you could, thanks

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-10-31 07:58 PM


Thanks RG, I know you would if you could

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
7 posted 1999-10-31 08:16 PM


Isis, I hope you find your way beyond the pain soo to live life full and happy
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 1999-11-01 12:39 PM


I will Hoot, by posting here i have worked out my demons, and pleased to say back to normal. Thanks

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



tori
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since 1999-06-18
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
9 posted 1999-11-01 12:47 PM


Very sad Isis.. but I've read on one of the reply's that you are doing better I'm gald to hear this

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 1999-11-01 03:23 PM


I'm late in responding, but wanted you to know you're never alone in thoughts and feelings such as these...I'm glad to know you've worked out a few of your problems. Be strong.
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
11 posted 1999-11-01 04:58 PM


Thanks Tori and Sunshine, all is calm now I just had to get the venom out

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

12 posted 1999-11-02 04:43 AM


Great place to express those feelings isn't it.Glad your better now!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
13 posted 1999-11-02 10:47 PM


Thanks again watcher my friend

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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