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Two Hearts as One

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Justina
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0 posted 10-31-1999 06:10 PM       View Profile for Justina   Email Justina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justina

Two Special People
One Special Day
A Dream to Share
A Long Life Away
Two Hearts As One
One Heart From Two
A Special Dream
Of Love Come True!

[This message has been edited by Justina (edited 10-31-1999).]
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devina
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very much to the point. good job!
hoot_owl_rn
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Short, sweet, not one wasted word
Tara Simms
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Might I suggest "two hearts as one" instead of "heat"? lol good job!
Justina
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Thanks guys! Short, simple and right to the point! lol I am all about suggestion, so Please let me know if I ever need to edit or something! Also: PLEASE check out my poem titled: RONCHETTO!!! No one has yet and I want some feedback! Thanks =) Justina
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Lovely!!

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