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Elizabeth
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0 posted 1999-10-31 05:40 PM


[This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 10-31-1999).]

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 11-04-1999).]

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1 posted 1999-10-31 05:43 PM


Oh, Elizabeth, this is heartbreaking.
Nothing from personal experience I hope.


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2 posted 1999-10-31 05:49 PM


Youth is so foolish to think that they will live forever.
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3 posted 1999-10-31 05:49 PM


It's based on a true story, but does not involve people I directly know. Still, it's had it's effect, and I hope people see this and realize what can happen. This guy was not a "bad" guy, but lots of people did not see what was going on with him, and those who did couldn't do much about it--he was a capable adult. And this is the result.

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"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."


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4 posted 1999-10-31 05:59 PM


But they do anyway, Martie...

and yes, Munda, way too often.

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"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."



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5 posted 1999-10-31 05:59 PM


Sad, very sad. Unfortunately these things happen too often.
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6 posted 1999-11-02 04:37 PM


So sad And it happens way to often!!

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7 posted 1999-11-02 05:20 PM


A tragic truth. Well Done Elizabeth!!

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8 posted 1999-11-03 05:07 PM


*surprise* two new replies!

Thank you, Pepper and Watcher.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."


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9 posted 1999-11-03 05:43 PM


Such tragedy, so sad. But when young and full of life, some just don't think. A tragic waste for many

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~Isis~
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10 posted 1999-11-03 11:24 PM


You're very right, Isis~thank you for reading and replying to this.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."


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