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I'm So Tired Let Me Sleep

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JOY 14
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0 posted 10-31-1999 05:05 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

I'm so tired, let me sleep
I've done so much already
Haven't I dug my hole too deep?

I'm so exhausted, let me go
I've gone so far already
Haven't I proven myself? Doesn't it show?

I'm so weak that I can't go on
I've given up trying to stay awake
Haven't I done what I needed to do; the extra mile, haven't I gone?
© Copyright 1999 Kristen Joy Jacobus - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-31-1999 05:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very good! Exactly how I feel every night!

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Denise

RainbowGirl
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2 posted 10-31-1999 07:28 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Joy: You can't go to sleep cause I'm here to prod you awake..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Isis
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3 posted 10-31-1999 08:05 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

It sux doesn't it? Instead of counting sheep count people you love, it's a nice way to end the day!!

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-31-1999 09:04 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I've felt the same way
Watcher666
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5 posted 11-02-1999 04:18 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Know this feeling well.Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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