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Take My Hand

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Ohme
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0 posted 10-31-1999 01:14 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ohme

Take My Hand

Take me by the hand and I will follow
along the paths where thorns and thistles grow.
If rocky ground should cause my foot to stumble
hold me close and I will never fall.

Lead me down a path so filled with darkness
that daylight never finds a place to lie,
then I will follow you, as we go right on through
while clinging to each other all the way.

Take me to a river wildly running
where rapids cascade over all we see.
And I'll just jump right in, not knowing how to swim
because I know you'd swim for both of us.

Take me by the hand and I will follow
along the paths that life may take us through
And I will gladly go, and sorrow never know
because I see you're holding my heart too.
© Copyright 1999 Lorene Meadows - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-31-1999 01:18 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely sentiments, Ohme! I enjoyed this!

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Indeed, Ohme, wonderful sentiments. Loved it. : )
Ohme
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Denise, Munda, thanks, for the comment.

Marzar, you just caught me wishfully thinking. I was wishing I could go, LOL

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I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day!
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Ohme, a wonderful expression
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This is lovely!! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
 
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