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Master
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0 posted 10-31-1999 12:31 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I must confess
Iím blessed with sorrow
As cupidís arrow
Hit my chest
It fell apart
(No not my heart--
The cupidís arrow)
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-31-1999 12:40 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is great Master, short, sweet and cute!

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Master
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2 posted 10-31-1999 11:00 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Denise!
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I like this little short poem. Some times much can be said with just a few words. And I think you did just that.
Master
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4 posted 10-31-1999 03:31 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Ohme, that's exactly what I intended!
WhtDove
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Very good! Short and sweet, as they say. But it sounded more short and broken hearted! HUGS Hope it heals soon.
Isis
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6 posted 10-31-1999 08:02 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Short, sweet but speaks volumes too. Next time I hope Cupid's arrow hit's it's mark my friend

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Master
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7 posted 10-31-1999 09:36 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Brokenhearted? nahhh... It was the arrow that broke, I'm ok! Thanks everyone!
wannabe_poet
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Cute poem!!
Kitty**
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A hardened heart,
not marshallow.
Next time 'luck'
my good fellow. ;-)

I really liked this!

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Kitty**
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10 posted 11-02-1999 05:37 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this....cute!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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sometimes it's a blessing yes
 
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