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** Precious Moments **
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** Precious Moments ** |
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Femme's Father Member
since 1999-10-30
Posts 58Carrollton, TX, USA |
Eyes as blue as the violets of the wild - Windows to an ever searching soul... Softly they caress me - With a smile, you do bless me... All this beauty is a prize to behold. A smile as warm as the early morning sun - As it shines on the cool morning dew... Lips so enticing - slowly inviting - Me - like a moth to the flame - Their soft heat is so sure to subdue... I try to control me - but somehow you hold me - by a power that I cannot restrain... So instead of saying "No"... I just start letting "Go"... I'm so helpless - you've won me again ! So hold me close and warm me with your love - As your flames soar over my soul... Engulf me - consume me - For I cannot defend me - So somehow, I'm just letting go. So take my love, let it flow like a river - Through the valleys of your lovely soul... Making warm places - within forbidden spaces - As passion is beginning to flow! So wine me and dine me - With your lips - sweet as a pure berry wine... I still can taste you - I still embrace you - Those moments with you so sublime... Till we are fulfilled of eachother, I yearn to be your lover - And hold you close one more time..... ** Written for my new bride - Mayme Evans... ------------------ A man's heart often cannot see the light - because of the darkness of it's own motives.... - James David |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful! Congratulations you two! How wonderful! ------------------ Denise |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Well written! Welcome to the Forum and the family... ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
So beautiful! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This is simply beautiful, such moments are to be cherished, such time together not to be taken for granted. I hope we will soon see more from you, James. Your poetry speaks from the soul and is a blessing to all who read it. Michael |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very, very lovely. Congratulations! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
Wow, I tell you sir, I most definaitly see where Gennifer gets this wonderful talent, no offense Femme, you are good indeed, and let me add, your daughter is wonderful person, and has been a good friend to me!!!!! |
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