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Femme's Father
since 10-30-1999
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Carrollton, TX, USA

0 posted 10-31-1999 12:20 AM       View Profile for Femme's Father   Email Femme's Father   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Femme's Father

Eyes as blue as the violets of the wild -
Windows to an ever searching soul...
Softly they caress me -
With a smile, you do bless me...
All this beauty is a prize to behold.

A smile as warm as the early morning sun -
As it shines on the cool morning dew...
Lips so enticing - slowly inviting -
Me - like a moth to the flame -
Their soft heat is so sure to subdue...

I try to control me - but somehow you hold me -
by a power that I cannot restrain...
So instead of saying "No"...
I just start letting "Go"...
I'm so helpless - you've won me again !

So hold me close and warm me with your love -
As your flames soar over my soul...
Engulf me - consume me -
For I cannot defend me -
So somehow, I'm just letting go.

So take my love, let it flow like a river -
Through the valleys of your lovely soul...
Making warm places - within forbidden spaces -
As passion is beginning to flow!
So wine me and dine me -
With your lips - sweet as a pure berry wine...
I still can taste you - I still embrace you -
Those moments with you so sublime...
Till we are fulfilled of eachother,
I yearn to be your lover -
And hold you close one more time.....

** Written for my new bride - Mayme Evans...

A man's heart often cannot see the light - because of the darkness of it's own motives.... - James David
© Copyright 1999 James H. David - All Rights Reserved
Member Seraphic
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1 posted 10-31-1999 12:23 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful! Congratulations you two! How wonderful!


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since 10-23-1999
Posts 1187
Tulsa, OK, USA

2 posted 10-31-1999 12:56 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Well written! Welcome to the Forum and the family...

Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.
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since 10-13-1999
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3 posted 11-02-1999 05:18 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

So beautiful!

Illusion...what we see and what we's all up to you.
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4 posted 11-02-1999 06:19 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

This is simply beautiful, such moments are to be cherished, such time together not to be taken for granted. I hope we will soon see more from you, James. Your poetry speaks from the soul and is a blessing to all who read it.

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since 08-19-99
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5 posted 11-02-1999 07:39 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Very, very lovely. Congratulations!

A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Richard 33
since 09-09-99
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glen easton, wv usa

6 posted 11-02-1999 09:15 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Wow, I tell you sir, I most definaitly see
where Gennifer gets this wonderful talent, no offense Femme, you are good indeed, and let me add, your daughter is wonderful person, and has been a good friend to me!!!!!
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