I Was Lifted Up On Angel's Wings (requested by Echo)

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

0 posted 1999-10-31 12:01 PM

I was lifted up on Angels wings,
And through the Heavens soared.
When I came upon a brilliant light,
I found it was my Lord.

With hair like snow and eyes of fire,
I bowed before His feet.
In His presence it was hard to stand,
My sins felt like concrete.

Head hung in sorrow, tears filled my eyes.
My mouth, it couldn't speak.
My sins were overpowering me.
My soul, it just felt weak.

A gentle hand reached out to touch me,
A voice like thunder spoke.
The love He gave enveloped my soul,
My heart no longer broke.

He put His loving arms around me,
Such peace that I felt then.
I was quite content in knowing that,
He'd do it all again.

Our righteous acts are like filthy rags,
The Lord reminded me.
Come in unto Me my precious child,
For I can set you free.

I was lifted up on Angel's wings,
And through the Heavens soared.
I had been forgivin my sin and...
My soul had been restored.

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

1 posted 1999-10-31 12:13 PM

I'll do the big smiley just for you...Thanks for reposting. Tis a BEAUTIFUL poem! I like it VERY much! You did a great job with this one! Like I said before..."and you are the one trying to tell me I am the one with the talent??" No no no tis the other way around indeed!

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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-10-31 12:14 PM

Yes, I think this is one of your best! So beautiful!

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Denise

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

3 posted 1999-10-31 01:50 AM

Well, I will take a bow then! Thank you both so very much! I like this one too I have to admit probably one of my favorites. Thanks!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-10-31 09:27 AM

Whtdove, this is breathtakingly beautiful Get this out to the publishers girl!!!

Verma
Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 80
Midlands, England

5 posted 1999-10-31 09:31 AM

Whtdove - This is brilliant, i didn't get to see it the first time around. Thanks for re-posting.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

6 posted 1999-10-31 10:14 AM

Thank you Hoot! I will do that! I promise.

Verma thanks much! Your welcome!

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

7 posted 1999-10-31 12:08 PM

This is very beautiful, WhtDove. It is the first time I have seen it. But I must say along with the others, Amen

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

8 posted 1999-10-31 01:53 PM

Much thanks to you Ohme!

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

9 posted 1999-10-31 06:06 PM

Truly beautiful WhtDove, this will give me a peaceful sleep. : ) Goodnight to y'all !

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

10 posted 1999-10-31 06:12 PM

Thank you Munda so much. May you have a peaceful sleep. G'Night!

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

11 posted 1999-11-02 04:34 PM

Well done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

12 posted 1999-11-02 05:21 PM

Thank you Watcher!

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