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Femme's Father
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since 1999-10-30
Posts 58
Carrollton, TX, USA

0 posted 1999-10-30 11:24 PM


If a man let love depart from his heart...
He creates an emptiness as unto a tomb -
And he shall wither & die therein -
And thus his own foolish heart...
Shall become his abode...
He shall live & die
within the tomb of his own heart!


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A man's heart often cannot see the light - because of the darkness of it's own motives.... - James David

© Copyright 1999 James H. David - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-10-30 11:29 PM


Well stated, James. Indeed, a man who loses
the capability to love has lost all. 'Tis a pleasue to make your aquaintence. Welcome to Passions.

Michael

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
2 posted 1999-10-30 11:31 PM


I liked that...a good lesson in it.

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-30 11:32 PM


Oh how true! Very nice!

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Denise


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-10-31 09:10 AM


I can see Femme gets her talent honestly, welcome to Passions
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-11-02 05:07 PM


Excellent!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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