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Corinne
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0 posted 10-30-1999 11:04 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corinne

His words sing to me
Sweet torturous song
Someone I cannot see
Ignites a flame
Forgotten so long

Envelops me
Blanket so soft, warm
Exists only in my mind
Never really reality
Writing from a snow storm
And me? You will never find

Me, I am not real
I am what your dreams hold
Tuning pitch of songs feel
Whispers in your ear?
I am you, so you would be
Me, you have been all along.

March 1999 Corinne Bailey
© Copyright 1999 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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This is unusal but I like it. A bit of a thinker.

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Interesting format, I enjoyed this
Watcher666
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Well done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
 
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