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Rico
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0 posted 10-30-1999 08:34 PM       View Profile for Rico   Email Rico   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rico

Unfinished

Leading lines of literature, a chuggin', tuggin' boat
Chomping through the paper like a very hungry goat
Free, flowing, fiesty, figments; figity frenzy inside
Metaphors are opening doors trying to stay alive
Emotions eagerly overflowing, Niagra take good notes
Crafty, cunning, chilling, brr! readers bring your coats
This could be "the one", I say! masterpiece for sure!
But then


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© Copyright 1999 Rico - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-30-1999 08:51 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

hehehehehe....will it ever be finished? Or is that the point of the title?! This is great!

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Denise

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2 posted 10-30-1999 10:42 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

HEY! I really like this one? I also wonder, if it is done now and the title gives it meaning, or if it is going to be finished?

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Rico
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3 posted 10-30-1999 11:06 PM       View Profile for Rico   Email Rico   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rico

To answer your question, the hidden Irony of the poem is that in fact it is finished. The poem is one that in fact is the state of some of my poems now. On my computer I have a folder of unfinished poems. I put them there untill I can make further progress and eventually finish them. I wrote this one out of frustration of my poems having good strong beginings but then I draw blanks as to the conclusions. I wrote "Unfinished" while trying to finish another poem. It was kinda like "Impromptu" I wrote it in five minutes.
Denise
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4 posted 10-30-1999 11:14 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

It's perfect just like it is! I'm glad that it is in its final state! Excellent!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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LOL...can relate for sure
Watcher666
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6 posted 11-02-1999 05:08 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Cute!

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