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Last date with Autumn

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Master
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0 posted 10-30-1999 03:30 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

The thirsty stars licked water out of puddles
The crispy breeze roamed through the lonely streets
I chewed my cotton candy, and the clouds
Would disconnect into the tiny threads and bits
The restless night would lean against my shoulders
The streetlights shinned directly in my eyes
But nothing passed my skin, my flesh, my fortress
I walked without a care, like hypnotized
So here we are and this, our final date together
Let’s make it seem eternal and unique
And I shall wait for you, for worse and for the better
Afraid to hear “good-bye,” we do not speak


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I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-30-1999 05:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice Master. I enjoyed reading this.

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Denise

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Great read Master
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Thanks Hoot and Denise!
 
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