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Rico
Junior Member
since 1999-10-29
Posts 20


0 posted 1999-10-30 10:46 AM


L. Javar E.
Time

The center of our attention

*the star*

By which our world revolves
yet
Measured by how our world
revolves
He is always on schedule
with
His own agenda that waits for
none
Uncontrolable: he is a continual
calculated
By some of the greatest minds
ever
And often kept by the
least
Mystical: He is the one true
medicine
Able to mend broken hearts
and
Wounds from the game of
love
Father is our straight edge
by
Which all are judged
by
The precise duration of a moment
by
The span of his children's
Life.

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Bon Appetite!

© Copyright 1999 Rico - All Rights Reserved
desperado
Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312
FT Hood,Tx
1 posted 1999-11-08 03:41 PM


a unique poem to say the least, yet I can't feel anything from it. it doesn't really stand out to me.
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 1999-11-08 07:53 PM


Welcome to the family. Not sure if I understood this poem, but I'll definitely read more of your work.
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