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Rico
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since 10-29-1999
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0 posted 10-30-1999 10:46 AM       View Profile for Rico   Email Rico   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rico

L. Javar E.
Time

The center of our attention

*the star*

By which our world revolves
yet
Measured by how our world
revolves
He is always on schedule
with
His own agenda that waits for
none
Uncontrolable: he is a continual
calculated
By some of the greatest minds
ever
And often kept by the
least
Mystical: He is the one true
medicine
Able to mend broken hearts
and
Wounds from the game of
love
Father is our straight edge
by
Which all are judged
by
The precise duration of a moment
by
The span of his children's
Life.

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Bon Appetite!
© Copyright 1999 Rico - All Rights Reserved
desperado
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since 05-24-99
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1 posted 11-08-1999 03:41 PM       View Profile for desperado   Email desperado   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for desperado

a unique poem to say the least, yet I can't feel anything from it. it doesn't really stand out to me.
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2 posted 11-08-1999 07:53 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family. Not sure if I understood this poem, but I'll definitely read more of your work.
 
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