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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 1999-10-30 07:06 AM


Don't let them fool you kiddies,
'Bout this thing call "Hallowe'en",
For it ain't no coincidence--
That it rhymes with HOLLOW SCREAMS!

Be dazzled not by the Spector
For all the free candy don't look,
For it is but a dangiling worm
On a deceptively baited Hook!

For out there are many Monsters
In the grass, all around are snakes,
Mischief awaits the unsuspecting
Heed this fair warning, for your sake!

But if you should still want to venture
In your greedy disquise anyway,
Then come and knock on my door--
I'll welcome you in as fair Prey!!

HAPPY HALLOWE'EN

© Copyright 1999 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
Fred Hobbs
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 329
Tallahassee, Florida, US
1 posted 1999-10-30 09:06 AM


Nice one Deleeme, Seasonal and forboding. I like that! Nice rhyme too.
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-10-30 05:56 PM


Spoooooky...chilling...very halloweeny!

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Denise


Julie
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
3 posted 1999-10-31 12:29 PM


Back to the top deleeme...after all it is Holloween Eve...this was very enticing...Nice work.

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Julie
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Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss it, you will land among the stars.~Les Brown~

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 1999-10-31 01:45 PM




Verma
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since 1999-10-25
Posts 80
Midlands, England
5 posted 1999-10-31 01:52 PM


Nice read Deleeme - its got me in the mood for Halloween, Oh that reminds me I must remember to put the chain on my front door..
Emmy
Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194
KY
6 posted 1999-10-31 03:01 PM


I'm sure not coming to YOUR door this Halloween! Yikes! Cute, Deleeme.
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
7 posted 1999-10-31 03:17 PM


Deleeme,
Which one was your door again?
Enjoyed the read.

Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
8 posted 1999-10-31 04:03 PM


Although I'd never be afraid to knock on your door, I will NOT knock on it tonight ! : )
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

9 posted 1999-11-02 04:43 PM


Enjoyed this one!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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