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One Voice (acrostic)

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 10-30-1999 06:14 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

One voice for you I swear love will not fail.
No one before looked past my stoic veil.
Each word from you once again renews trust.
Vivaciously vibrant, for you I lust.
Others have tried empty words of romance.
I am here for you and never by chance.
Celebrations of love lifted my curse.
Each loving word unlocks my gift for verse.


©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©



[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 10-30-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 10-30-1999 06:18 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

nicely done dream yuh she shall love it
caroline
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2 posted 10-30-1999 06:20 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

How beautiful! Lucky she is to have this penned for her

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Christopher
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3 posted 10-30-1999 06:21 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Acrostically perfect!
And indeed a success... I have a feeling she will treasure this my friend!
Watcher666
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4 posted 10-30-1999 09:20 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Very Well Done Dear Brother!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
tori
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5 posted 10-30-1999 11:21 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Oh how wonderful DE... this I know will lighten her soul, as she has lightened you!!
No words more beautifully writen my friend!
Pepper
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6 posted 10-30-1999 11:36 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Beautiful!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Pepper
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8 posted 10-30-1999 11:37 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

oops!


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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!


[This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 10-30-1999).]
Serain
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9 posted 10-30-1999 09:56 PM       View Profile for Serain   Email Serain   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Serain

nice mr evil
WhtDove
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10 posted 10-30-1999 10:37 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well said my friend. I'm sure she will treasure this!
Systematic Decay
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11 posted 10-30-1999 10:37 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

A beautiful poem, my friend

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Elizabeth
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12 posted 10-31-1999 10:57 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

A beautiful tribute, DreamEvil.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

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13 posted 10-31-1999 11:39 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

How could anyone not love such a verse? *S* Well done, DE!
Dark Angel
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14 posted 11-02-1999 07:06 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Soul-Brother, Absolutley Fabulous!! loved it.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


JennyLee
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15 posted 11-02-1999 08:56 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

So beautiful Dream, and so talented you are !!

Jenny
poetFemmeFatale
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16 posted 11-02-1999 09:33 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

How I do love to hear you *sing* when you're smitten.....Very beautiful side to you Dream, and also a very beautiful acrostic...one she will treasure always.

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

Blackdrake
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17 posted 11-02-1999 10:43 AM       View Profile for Blackdrake   Email Blackdrake   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blackdrake

Beautiful! She is a lucky girl for such devotion.

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Thy own Darkness shall conquer the Light
passing shadows
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18 posted 04-25-2004 10:30 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

beautiful!
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