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Dark Endless Sky

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Isis
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0 posted 10-30-1999 02:47 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis


Dark, endless, night sky,
Do you hear me crying?
Do you hear me sigh?
Do you know I feel like I might die?

Dark abyss up above,
Do you know I'm thristing for love?
Do you know I'm drowning in sorrow?
Don't know if there'll even be a tomorrow?

Cloud filled sky without a star shining,
Do you feel my need?
Do you understand?
Will I ever succeed?

Endless trails of the night,
Tonight no bringer of light,
Does anyone even begin to fathom,
The despair that is my plight?

I don't think you are there for me tonight,
No sunsets, or twinkling pinholes in the curtain of night,
No beacons in the darkness,
Nothing beautiful in sight.

Just cold seclusion,
No warmth for me this eve,
Perhaps I should go inside now,
I shall turn and leave.


PLEASE NOTE: I'm not depressed or sad, this just came forth,

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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Christopher
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1 posted 10-30-1999 06:07 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Glad to hear you're not depressed...I was going to ask!

's then Isis!
Isis
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2 posted 10-30-1999 06:19 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Thanks for the caring thought anyway Chris!!

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Denise
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3 posted 10-30-1999 06:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Great poem, Isis. So glad that you aren't depressed though!

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Denise

Isis
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4 posted 10-30-1999 06:56 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Glad you liked it Denise

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Emmy
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5 posted 10-30-1999 07:02 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

Ah yes, just because a poet has a depressing thought or two doesn't mean they're depressed themselves. I have to explain that a lot. Nicely done, Isis, nicely done.
Isis
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6 posted 10-30-1999 07:09 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Thanks Emmy. I am not alone in my with no cause somewhat depressing poems then am I?

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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