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Thunder Moomba
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since 1999-10-30
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Baldwin Park, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-10-30 02:46 AM


I never wanted the stars,
I never shot for the moon.

I like them where they are,
All I wanted was you...

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~Jr. Rodrigo M. Daz_

[This message has been edited by Thunder Moomba (edited 10-31-1999).]

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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 1999-10-30 02:47 AM


well I like it whoever I am I enjoyed it and well said
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-10-30 02:56 AM


Short but it speaks volumes - great job

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-30 09:04 PM


Ditto!

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Denise


WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 1999-10-30 09:08 PM


Lots said, few words. Great way to get the point across!
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-10-31 09:03 AM


Excellent!! SO much said in so few words and not a single word wasted
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