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A Little Love for Some Peace of Mind

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just me
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since 10-29-1999
Posts 15
marysville, wa USA


0 posted 10-30-1999 02:32 AM       View Profile for just me   Email just me   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for just me

Hey Mr. Moon, has baby star
been interfering with your night?
Is she in your dreams, is she in your mind,
does she cause you any fright?
Well can't you see, that baby star
is afraid to be alone?
Oh, Mr. Moon, if you gave her love
she might call it just a loan.

A little love for some peace of mind,
Just shelter her from the storm.
A little love she's been tryin' to find,
Just someone's heart to keep her warm.

Well Mr. Moon, if you walk away,
You won't lose a thing at all.
But from the sky, in the deep of the night,
is an awful long way to fall.
And baby star has her heart reached out,
for you to grab a hold.
Mr. Moon, do you know,in the night,
the dark is very cold.

And a little love for some peace of mind
Isn't a very big price to pay.
A little love is all she's trying to find
Well, Mr. Moon, what do you say?

© Copyright 1999 just me - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 09-06-99
Posts 6390
Sunny Queensland


1 posted 10-30-1999 02:36 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

My God I love this!!! The imagery and everything really touched me. Bravo

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Isis
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since 09-06-99
Posts 6390
Sunny Queensland


2 posted 10-30-1999 02:38 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

P.S. Not to mention the subtleties ( I think I spelled that wrong ) Great job

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


just me
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since 10-29-1999
Posts 15
marysville, wa USA


3 posted 10-30-1999 03:32 AM       View Profile for just me   Email just me   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for just me

Why thankyou Isis. My children love all my poems about Mr. Moon and Baby Star. But then they are a little prejudice. This site is the best thing I have found in my life for a long, long time. I think I'm in LOVE!! HA! HA!
RainbowGirl
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since 07-31-99
Posts 3167
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4 posted 10-30-1999 12:50 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Brilliant...

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

 
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