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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 1999-10-30 12:41 PM


Vegas in the summer, is one twenty in the shade-
But it’s lovely in December, when the Finals have been made.
You are so doggone itchy, can’t wait till it begins-
You’ve made it to the Finals, all you have to do is win.

Eighty thousand miles this year, you’ve had a lot of luck-
At drawing bulls who weren’t too mean, and horses that could buck.
You’ve only gotten hung up twice, and neither time was bad-
You rode them hard, and spurred them clean, and gave it all you had.

You’ve had some honest judges, the horses were the same-
The times that you’ve been goose-egged, you know you were to blame,
Ten times you’ll try your hand out here, then it all begins again-
You’ve made it to the Finals, all you have to do is win.

All you ever wanted, was to ride the Rodeo-
To sack your clothes and riggin’ and to go on down the road.
You’ve tried your hand on real rough stock, and rougher, meaner men-
You’ve made it to the Finals, all you have to do is win.

© Copyright 1999 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-30 10:02 PM


Another enjoyable piece of writing here! Great storyteller, you are!

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Denise


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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
2 posted 1999-10-30 10:12 PM


Still got that perfect flavor dripping off every word. Another deserving WELL DONE.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-10-31 09:04 AM


Ah, It's amazing how much you can write about cowboys and Rodeos and still keep my attention. You are indeed a master story teller
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-11-02 05:08 PM


Well done...liked this much!

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