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The Jackal
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0 posted 10-29-1999 11:46 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

im a being of the inside
drawing outside the lines
like to stare at your outside
shaking in the cold..
wanting too so much
holding onto you is never enough..
all i will wonder
is what you think of me.
such a freak
tell me what you see
if you ever even stare at me
with some sort of passion
at the role youve given me
so..everlasting..





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desperado
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1 posted 11-08-1999 03:53 PM       View Profile for desperado   Email desperado   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for desperado

origional. I really did like the beginning. "Im a being of the inside / drawing outside the lines" very cool.

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Julie
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2 posted 11-08-1999 10:51 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

I too was once told that I was a person that drew outside the lines...guess that makes us original people...this is not always a bad thing. Liked this poem...
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3 posted 11-09-1999 01:29 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done!

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