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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
im a being of the inside drawing outside the lines like to stare at your outside shaking in the cold.. wanting too so much holding onto you is never enough.. all i will wonder is what you think of me. such a freak tell me what you see if you ever even stare at me with some sort of passion at the role youve given me so..everlasting.. ------------------ |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
origional. I really did like the beginning. "Im a being of the inside / drawing outside the lines" very cool. [This message has been edited by desperado (edited 11-08-1999).] |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I too was once told that I was a person that drew outside the lines...guess that makes us original people...this is not always a bad thing. Liked this poem...  |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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