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Martie
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0 posted 1999-10-29 09:58 PM



Sing the sky
Play the grass
All the clouds
fluff gentle
on this day

The thought is tossed
in and out of flower
The mood is blown
with the wind
The sun traces my dreams
and races with them
to the gate

Sing the sky
Play the grass
All the clouds
fluff gentle
on this day

© Copyright 1999 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-10-29 10:02 PM


A lovely piece, makes me want to skip through a meadow singing!

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Denise


Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-02 06:14 PM


Good imagery. Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-11-02 11:23 PM


Sounds like a beautiful day
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2004-04-25 09:52 PM


beautiful
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