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12 pale roses

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 10-29-1999 06:18 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

delivered to my door
each rose a message
like the year before
the first is one of love
but promises no more
the second speaks of freedom
and the opening of a door
the third speaks of devotion
on friendship thoughts galore
the forth is of emotion
that I couldn't and don't ignore
the fifth is one of rest
reminds me of what's in store
sixth speaks of dreams gone by
which can never be restored
the seventh is of heaven
a price we can't afford
the eight is one of wonder
not a knight but a Lord
the ninth is of blessing
and is a true reward
the tenth a kindly thought
elevnth, the last before the end
A rainbow cherished and more
twelve..a very much loved friend

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 10-29-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
PhaerieChild
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1 posted 10-29-1999 06:21 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Rainbow, this is beautiful!!

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
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Isis
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2 posted 10-29-1999 06:28 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Absolutely lovely RG

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Cast your soul to the sea,
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Craig
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3 posted 10-29-1999 06:28 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig

I like this one, it's just a pity there weren't more roses so it could have been longer.

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Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.


RainbowGirl
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4 posted 10-29-1999 06:44 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thank you...these roses are drinking water currently and then I'll put them in a vase and think of a way to keep them alive..:-))

HUGS

Craig: Believe me, 12 makes my heart struggle...but they are beautiful and deserved my thoughts...someday they'll be read in an archive..:-)

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 10-29-1999).]
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5 posted 10-29-1999 08:36 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

A beautiful Rainboquet!!! You deserve flowers every day.
Pepper
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7 posted 10-29-1999 09:16 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Simply lovely Rainbow!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 10-29-1999 11:58 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

RG,
I think balladeer said it best, well done.
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9 posted 10-30-1999 12:19 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

The title grabbed me on this one--I love roses--and this poem was just beautiful, RainbowGirl. May I print it?

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

RainbowGirl
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10 posted 10-30-1999 03:51 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Balladeer: "Rainboquet" I like that and I'll let you know the address to send the flowers too...*g*...LOL

HUSG

marzar: Thank you..

HUGS

Pepper: Thanks sweetheart..

HUGS

Seymour: You want the address as well?...*g*..

HUGS

Elizabeth: Thank you and of course, my pleasure..

HUGS



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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

wayoutwalt
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11 posted 10-30-1999 04:01 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

those 12 lil roses made for a sweet poem nicely done o and roses are red violets are blue just to clear that up
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12 posted 10-30-1999 05:00 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Lovely poem RG Enjoy those roses, I am sure that you deserve dozens of them!

*LOL* Walt...glad you clarified that for us..heheheh

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

U K Hero
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13 posted 10-30-1999 05:33 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

one of the best that I have had the pleasure of reading in passions

much loved.
Christopher
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14 posted 10-30-1999 05:49 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Balladeer...would you quit stealing the good lines!!! I was going to say, RG, before Bal so rudely interrupted, that you are like into a rose yourself!
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15 posted 10-30-1999 02:36 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I'll bet they're not half as beautiful as you... but you so deserve dozens. *G* Great poem!
Systematic Decay
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16 posted 10-30-1999 04:52 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Beautiful poem, RG.

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RainbowGirl
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17 posted 10-30-1999 05:42 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Walt: Thank you sweetheart...That brought back some memories of being a teenager..*g*

HUGS

Caroline: I adore flowers and these are so very beautiful.. All women deserve flowers..

HUGS

U K Hero: You flatterer...*g* but thank you anyway..

HUGS

Chris: He is a cheeky devil, isn't he?..*g* but then you didn't get short changed on the flattery either must have been next to him in the queue...LOL

HUSG

Suthern: Bless you my friend..

HUSG

SD: Thank you..

HUGS


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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Andrew Scott
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18 posted 10-30-1999 06:02 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Lady Rainbow: A most wonderful piece... I echo all the above. Think of each response as a flower laid upon your door.
Denise
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19 posted 10-30-1999 09:42 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely, lovely, lovely! Roses are so lovely too, aren't they?!

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Denise

RainbowGirl
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20 posted 10-31-1999 05:55 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Andrew: Thank you, a lovely thought, that way I would have roses each and every day..

HUGS

dsnyder: Yes, they are and smell divine..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

JTF
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21 posted 11-02-1999 03:42 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

Thank you ... for sharing this beautiful poem

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Plaisir d'amour ne dure qu'un moment,
Chagrin d'amour dure toute la vie.
Watcher666
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22 posted 11-02-1999 05:50 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Dark Angel
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23 posted 11-02-1999 06:19 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Hey Rainbow, this is truly a beautiful poem, Well Done !!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


RainbowGirl
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24 posted 11-02-1999 09:26 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

JTF: You're welcome..

HUSG

Watcher/Dark Angel

Thank you both..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Iloveit
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25 posted 11-02-1999 09:36 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

RG, I read this yesterday, but couldn't get a post box to tell you how beautiful it is....
hugs
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