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WhtDove
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0 posted 10-29-1999 06:02 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Its not those blue eyes
That make my heart melt
But flattering words
You told me, I felt.

Not very often
Are they words that I hear
When you say them to me
My eyes start to tear

It's my great weakness
Those words I long for
My heart opens wide
My mind shuts the door

Thoughts that I'm having
Don't know that I should
If I could explain
You know that I would.

It's quite confusing
The way that I feel
Your words they mean much
They have great appeal

Those flattering words
I know to beware
Can't seem to help it
They just draw me near

I want to reach out
Run into your arms
I know if I did
It might cause much harm

I can't seem to stop
My thoughts are of you
I push them away
They still come back through

I know these feelings
Come cuz what I've lacked
Don't want to scare you
Just can't turn my back

My face lights right up
When you come on line
You make me feel special
Most all of the time

Think I will stop
Don't know what to say
Cept that I'm hoping
You don't run away
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hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 10-29-1999 06:11 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

What a nice expression of your feelings Whtdove. I think this person is good for you to have around
Isis
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since 09-06-99
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Sunny Queensland


2 posted 10-29-1999 06:27 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Who is it WhtDove? You got my curiousity going. Beware, look what happened for me. Great poem. Hope to talk to you soon.

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Cast your soul to the sea,
When the dark nights seem endless,
Please remember me.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 07-22-99
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3 posted 10-29-1999 06:57 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you Hoot! You're so sweet! I like to have this person around.

Isis, sorry I will not tell! Hope to talk to you soon too! Thank you

[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 10-29-1999).]
tori
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since 06-18-99
Posts 521
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


4 posted 10-29-1999 07:29 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Well now Dove I know why my cyber farewell sparked you to tears..Hum...
This was absolutely beautiful my friend, and if you get a chance go read my reply to you on Cyber Farewell..
RobertB
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since 09-26-1999
Posts 1121
Champaign, IL


5 posted 10-29-1999 07:30 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

very nice!!!! well explains your feelings

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
WhtDove
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6 posted 10-29-1999 07:59 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Tori what can I say? I will go read that reply. Thanks my friend! Thank you for your wonderful comment!

Thank you Robert, glad to see your back again.

Balladeer
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7 posted 10-29-1999 08:03 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Great poem, Dovey. We all like to be acknowledged for our qualities and it is natural to feel close to those who take the time to do so. You have many, which shows in your poetry and your sincerity. If there is someone who makes you feel good by pointing out the good things about you, there's no need to take action. Simply enjoy the fortune to have a good friend. If you feel this person is trying to take advantage of you, run for your life. But many friendships have been formed here at Passions. This could be one.
Denise
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8 posted 10-29-1999 08:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is lovely, WhtDove. Kind words can do so much!

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Denise

WhtDove
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9 posted 10-29-1999 09:32 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Balladeer thank you! Thank you for your kind words buddy! I always appreciate them!

Denise thanks to you also. Yes, kind words can do much!
Michael
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since 08-13-99
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10 posted 10-30-1999 03:37 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

This is a lovely poem, WhtDove. It is amazing the flurry of emotion that can overwhelm us from someone saying just the right words to you, almost as if they reach down into your soul. Beautifully done, you have captured the moment with this one.

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Michael Anderson

And after-drunkeness of soul
Succeeds the glory of the bowl -
An idle longing night and day
To dream my very life away


EAP

Christopher
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since 08-02-99
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Purgatorial Incarceration


11 posted 10-30-1999 06:05 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Magnificent!
And who says you can't feel for someone you've never met? The hert and mind of a person are what's important, and I can see you recognize that!
HUGS!
WhtDove
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12 posted 10-30-1999 02:06 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you Michael! I'm at a loss for words with all your comments, everyones. They all are sweet words and ever so kind.

Christopher yes we can. Though it's a wonderful friendship!
Thank you all so much, you really are so sweet and understanding!
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


13 posted 10-30-1999 02:23 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Lovely, WhtDove...
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