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Your beautiful pain

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Patrick B
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0 posted 10-29-1999 03:38 PM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

Do you ever doubt this path we are travelled?
Will our love become unravelled?
Twelve long months have come and gone,
Yet we are still apart,will we ever be one?
Words by the million from fingertips,
Will I ever taste your sweet lips?
So is this it,our only path?
I never get your smile or laugh?
Too much to lose,so much to gain,
I love you,this beautiful pain,
They say that love will find a way,
will we ever find that day?
I know my love can wait forever,
The answer to my questions,never,
Shalll I close us like a book?
If I'm sad I can take a look,
Feel the pages,stroke the cover,
The memory of my wonderful lover.


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RobertB
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1 posted 10-29-1999 07:47 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Hmm.... this feels familiar to me. I understand you here.

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Denise
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2 posted 10-29-1999 07:50 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I feel for all you long distance lovers. You have expressed your pain and longing very well. Hope you can be together soon!

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Denise

Watcher666
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3 posted 11-02-1999 06:10 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well expressed feelings! Well done!

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passing shadows
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4 posted 04-25-2004 09:57 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

ouch
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