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Time and Tide

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Rico
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0 posted 10-29-1999 01:05 PM       View Profile for Rico   Email Rico   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rico

Time and Tide

I'd heard that she had fallen
And I really meant to see her
But the days kept passing, fleeing
And demands kept pushing, pressing
And I couldn't find the time
So I never went by

I just read in the paper
That while I was spinning, rushing
In my crazy circles
On my whirl-a-gig ride,
There were things she had to do
and she couldn't wait for me
So she went ahead without me
And Died.
© Copyright 1999 Rico - All Rights Reserved
RobertB
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1 posted 10-29-1999 07:49 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

I like this style...your style....you are a free thinker I think!!

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Fred Hobbs
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2 posted 10-29-1999 08:52 PM       View Profile for Fred Hobbs   Email Fred Hobbs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Fred Hobbs's Home Page   View IP for Fred Hobbs

Rico,

Good poem, sad topic. It happens way too often.
Watcher666
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3 posted 11-02-1999 06:12 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

So sad

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
passing shadows
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ouch
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