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Rico
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since 1999-10-29
Posts 20


0 posted 1999-10-29 01:05 PM


Time and Tide

I'd heard that she had fallen
And I really meant to see her
But the days kept passing, fleeing
And demands kept pushing, pressing
And I couldn't find the time
So I never went by

I just read in the paper
That while I was spinning, rushing
In my crazy circles
On my whirl-a-gig ride,
There were things she had to do
and she couldn't wait for me
So she went ahead without me
And Died.

© Copyright 1999 Rico - All Rights Reserved
RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
1 posted 1999-10-29 07:49 PM


I like this style...your style....you are a free thinker I think!!

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Fred Hobbs
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 329
Tallahassee, Florida, US
2 posted 1999-10-29 08:52 PM


Rico,

Good poem, sad topic. It happens way too often.

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-02 06:12 PM


So sad

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-04-25 09:57 PM


ouch
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