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Systematic Decay
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0 posted 10-29-1999 01:04 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Systematic Decay

Crazy man he is
He's killing in the garden
Bloodying flowers

Smell the guilty breeze
He steals virgin innocence
Bloodies the flowers

Please make daddy stop
Dirtying my garden, In
The bloody flowers

~This was written after I hear a tale of rape on young girls that is absolutely horrifying. Lost innocence is a tragic thing. ~



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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
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RSEvans
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1 posted 10-29-1999 03:49 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

A most disturbing image.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.
DreamEvil
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2 posted 10-30-1999 05:53 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I am glad the tale inspired you, my friend. I am myself penning the tale in it's entirety, in both verse and prose for those that wish to become aware of the warning signs. I plan to post them just after my move.

Thank you Sys, for giving me your ear and for crafting such verse.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

RainbowGirl
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3 posted 10-30-1999 06:00 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

and the punishment never fits the crime..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Isis
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4 posted 10-30-1999 06:25 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

What punishment WOULD fit the crime, only castration I think. Great poem though, so much for little souls to endure

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
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hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 10-30-1999 07:23 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very tramatic, very well put.
Systematic Decay
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6 posted 10-30-1999 08:25 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Thank you everyone, for your replies. And thank you Dream, for sharing the story. Can't wait to erad your version of it.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
 
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