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Rocks and River
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Rocks and River |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Rocks and River It happens when we’re sleeping Focused thoughts come into view Gentle spirits call a meeting A place where we pass through Where mighty rushing rivers flow Green landscapes burgeoning And indigo dog violets grow Patience and love harvesting You, the stream flowing I, the shape of stability Growing, never plateauing Wearing me smooth, subtly At times nature tears us apart She regards us with suspicion Leaving us with wounded hearts To renew love sans inhibition Thoughts pouring onto each other Repeating rhythms brimming over Holding forth on terra firma Fluid and solid, rocks and river (c) 1999 CM Bailey |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Corinne, what can I say? I love it. The weaving of nature and love, two of my favorite subjects, is joyous. Thank you. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, I liked all aspects of this poem, very good. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this one.Nicely done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ 'It happens when we’re sleeping Focused thoughts come into view Gentle spirits call a meeting A place where we pass through' I adore the gentle flow of this piece~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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