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Rocks and River

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Corinne
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Rocks and River

It happens when we’re sleeping
Focused thoughts come into view
Gentle spirits call a meeting
A place where we pass through

Where mighty rushing rivers flow
Green landscapes burgeoning
And indigo dog violets grow
Patience and love harvesting

You, the stream flowing
I, the shape of stability
Growing, never plateauing
Wearing me smooth, subtly

At times nature tears us apart
She regards us with suspicion
Leaving us with wounded hearts
To renew love sans inhibition

Thoughts pouring onto each other
Repeating rhythms brimming over
Holding forth on terra firma
Fluid and solid, rocks and river

(c) 1999 CM Bailey

© Copyright 1999 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
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Corinne, what can I say? I love it. The weaving of nature and love, two of my favorite subjects, is joyous. Thank you.

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Corinne,
I liked all aspects of this poem, very good.
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Liked this one.Nicely done.

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4 posted 01-30-2002 12:14 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Corinne~

'It happens when we’re sleeping
Focused thoughts come into view
Gentle spirits call a meeting
A place where we pass through'


I adore the gentle flow of this piece~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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beautiful!
 
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