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Ruby Slippers(lyric)

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redwriter1
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0 posted 10-29-1999 08:14 AM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for redwriter1

IíM TAKING OFF THESE RUBY SLIPPERS
IíVE GIVEN UP ON THE FAIRY TALE
I GAVE AWAY MY ROSE COLORED GLASSES
I MISSED THE BOAT
I DONíT KNOW WHERE THE SHIP IS
THATíS WHY IíM TAKING OFF
THESE RUBY SLIPPERS

THE GOOD WITCH OF THE NORTH
WENT SOUTH FOR THE WINTER
LEFT ME HERE AND WOULDNíT TAKE ME WITH HER
I WANTED TO GO..
BUT IíM SURE GONNA MISS HER
WHEN I TAKE OFF THESE RUBY SLIPPERS

SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW IS MY BACKYARD
I KNOW ITíS THERE

BUT SOMETHING ABOUT THOSE SHOES ,
THEY NEVER TELL YOU
THEY CAN TAKE YOU HOME
BUT ONLY IF YOU WANT TO
CLICK YOUR HEELS SAY THE WORDS
IT WONíT MAKE A DIFFERENCE
TIL YOU TAKE OFF THOSE RUBY SLIPPERS

CALL ME A FOOL BUT I KNOW WHERE MY HOME IS
AND YOU CANíT GET THERE FROM HERE
I CLICKED MY HEELS SAID THE WORDS
IT NEVER MADE A DIFFERENCE
TIL I TOOK OFF THOSE RUBY SLIPPERS

SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW
SKYS ARE BLUE
AND THE DREAMS THAT YOU DARE TO DREAM
REALLY DO COME TRUE


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Kay-lynn
**A dream is a wish your heart makes :)

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Watcher666
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1 posted 10-29-1999 11:43 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done.

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hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 10-29-1999 12:09 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I really like this....I do have a problem with caps though. This poems speaks loudly enough for itself, no need for caps
redwriter1
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3 posted 10-29-1999 01:33 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

sorry about the caps. Didn't even realize it.
Pepper
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4 posted 10-29-1999 02:22 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Very Good!


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