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Who We Are

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Lee Benthin
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 19
Marysville, WA USA


0 posted 10-29-1999 03:27 AM       View Profile for Lee Benthin   Email Lee Benthin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lee Benthin

Thankyou for your affection
Your loving, your attention.
Thankyou for my new dreams
By the way did I mention?
I love you,
I love you,
I love you for who you are.

Take a moment to believe me
This is the way love should be.
Together, Forever. Surrender.
Your heart now belongs to me.
I love you,
I love you,
I love you for who we are.

And who we are, we are lovers.
And who we are is best of friends.
For us there are no others,
Our love is where the searching ends.

So...
Thankyou for your affection
Your, loving, your attention.
Thankyou for my new dreams
By the way did I mention?
I love you.
I love you.
I love you for who we are.
© Copyright 1999 Lee Benthin - All Rights Reserved
brandondinsmore
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since 10-27-1999
Posts 140
OKC, OK


1 posted 10-29-1999 09:42 AM       View Profile for brandondinsmore   Email brandondinsmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brandondinsmore

GREAT! Very lyrical. Is this, by chance, a song?
You are a love-loving person, are you not?
Keep writing and let me see some more of that stuff!

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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 10-29-1999 10:10 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lee,
Catching and I enjoyed the read.
Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
Posts 1630


3 posted 10-29-1999 11:45 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Enjoyed this much! Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Denise
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4 posted 10-30-1999 08:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely and sweet, Lee. I enjoyed reading this!

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Denise

 
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