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Lee Benthin
Junior Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 19
Marysville, WA USA

0 posted 1999-10-29 03:27 AM


Thankyou for your affection
Your loving, your attention.
Thankyou for my new dreams
By the way did I mention?
I love you,
I love you,
I love you for who you are.

Take a moment to believe me
This is the way love should be.
Together, Forever. Surrender.
Your heart now belongs to me.
I love you,
I love you,
I love you for who we are.

And who we are, we are lovers.
And who we are is best of friends.
For us there are no others,
Our love is where the searching ends.

So...
Thankyou for your affection
Your, loving, your attention.
Thankyou for my new dreams
By the way did I mention?
I love you.
I love you.
I love you for who we are.

© Copyright 1999 Lee Benthin - All Rights Reserved
brandondinsmore
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142
OKC, OK
1 posted 1999-10-29 09:42 AM


GREAT! Very lyrical. Is this, by chance, a song?
You are a love-loving person, are you not?
Keep writing and let me see some more of that stuff!

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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 1999-10-29 10:10 AM


Lee,
Catching and I enjoyed the read.

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-29 11:45 AM


Enjoyed this much! Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-10-30 08:23 PM


Very lovely and sweet, Lee. I enjoyed reading this!

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Denise


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