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If You Only Would
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If You Only Would |
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Lee Benthin Junior Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 19Marysville, WA USA |
You look at me I look at you, words unspoken between us two. Perhaps it's fate maybe destiny, I do believe Desire's not just in me. Ny timing soff so you say, still it seems I should stay. You like the game and so do I, I do believe we see eye to eye. I close my eyes, I see you there. Run my fingers through your hair. I kiss your lips, you take my hand. I do believe you understand. I do believe I want your heart. I do believe we should start. I do believe we could be good. I do believe if you only would. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Well put. I can feel the nervousness of the proposition. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
If all it took as believing.....liked this much. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I liked the flow of this...great work. |
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just me Junior Member
since 1999-10-29
Posts 15marysville, wa USA |
Thank you everyone. Brad, if you read this, I'm sorry I didn't read my E-mail last night until after I had posted all the poems. With all the excitement of finding this site, I went a little crazy. I tried to E-mail Brad back last night, but it wouldn't work--I'm kind of new at this computer stuff. So please accept my apologies for going so crazy and writing so much. I will spend the next few nights reading others, which I already do a lot, and writing. If there are certain rules where can I find them? E-mail me. Thanks again for all the support. Lee (alias) just me |
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