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Missing You

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Rico
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0 posted 10-29-1999 01:15 AM       View Profile for Rico   Email Rico   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rico

when words don't add up to a sum
when you can't express what's there
when you feel what's inside won't come
when you forget and begin to stare

the words will come in an instant
when your heart's gate is open
and you think about the only constant
what you feel is only spoken

then the other can feel sincerity
knowing you're true inside the core
you're hearts message becomes clarity
the gate opens and you start to pour

the cup runs over with your feelings
they drink and are touched by the same
no more empty thoughts or ramblings
but expression igniting many flames

my heart is full
my feelings many
my gate now opened
expression: I miss you
© Copyright 1999 Rico - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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1 posted 10-29-1999 01:32 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

This is lovely! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
devina
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since 10-28-1999
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2 posted 10-29-1999 03:48 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is a beautiful and unique interpretation of missing someone. I hope you don't have to wait long.
Patrick B
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3 posted 10-29-1999 03:52 PM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

the sentiments feel familiar,very good
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