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Rico
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0 posted 10-29-1999 12:49 AM       View Profile for Rico   Email Rico   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rico

One look at you my eyes no longer blink
My composure slips and I struggle to think
My throat: bone dry I need something to drink
My love, My heart, as sweet as can be
You have an amazing affect on me

As you walk towards me, my butterflies flutter
When you arrive my speech turns to studder
I try and try but "hi" just won't utter
My love, My heart, as sweet as can be
You have an amazing affect on me

Briefly though, you have to leave
As you are going away I can't believe
That my time and attention you gladly recieve
My love, My heart, as sweet as can be
You have an amazing affect on me
© Copyright 1999 Rico - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 10-29-1999 12:58 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this much!! Nicely done

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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2 posted 10-29-1999 10:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so sweet, Rico! I enjoyed this very much!

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Denise

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