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devina
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0 posted 10-28-1999 11:32 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina

I FELT YOUR CHILLING TEARS SPRINKLE ON MY EYELIDS THIS MORNING.
I FELT YOU, AND I SOFTLY STARTED TO CRY.

I FELT YOUR PRESENCE SURROUNDING ME THIS ENTIRE DAY.
AND SENSING THIS, MY TEARS DRY AWAY.

TO HAVE YOU WATCHING OVER, LIKE AN EAGLE IN MIDFLIGHT-
TO SEE YOUR BRIGHTNESS IN EACH STAR THAT SHINES AT NIGHT-
TO HEAR YOUR SOOTHING VOICE, AS IT BRUSHES PAST MY SIDE-
TO WATCH EACH GRACEFUL CLOUD, AS THEY GO SAILING BY.

ONLY TO SAY "I MISS YOU," WOULDN'T BE QUITE ENOUGH.
SO I'LL AWAIT THE DAY, WHEN GOD CHOOSES TO REUNITE US.


THIS POEM IS ONE OF MANY YOUV'E YET READ, DEDICATED TO MY FATHER, WHO PASSED AWAY OVER SEVEN YEARS AGO. I CAN NO LONGER HAVE HIM IN MY LIFE, BUT WILL NEVER LET GO OF HIS MEMORIES IN MY LIFETIME.
© Copyright 1999 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-28-1999 11:40 PM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy 2

wow
this was beautiful!
great job

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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devina
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2 posted 10-29-1999 02:24 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Thank you for your opinion. Your interest is always one of the biggest compliments!
Denise
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3 posted 10-29-1999 10:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A lovely tribute to your Dad. So touching.

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Denise

 
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