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Bloody Paper..

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The Jackal
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0 posted 10-28-1999 09:54 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

its as he said it might be
do we listen
or are we too occupied
with anarchy
underneath the peaceful tree
that worm is corrupting again
soon eden will be gone..
all for what...
the lust you need
the bloody paper you desire more
your constant wanting
worshipping of the spotlight
burns that tree
that could grant us immortality
last power you ever recieve
what a murderer...
we all would be..
to not stop this disease




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Systematic Decay
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1 posted 10-28-1999 10:43 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

interesting poem...may I ask, what exactly is the bloody paper?

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
The Jackal
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2 posted 10-28-1999 11:43 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Jackal

Money..
thanks for your replies ,appreciate it
Denise
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3 posted 10-28-1999 11:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very good, Jackal. Lots of thought in this!


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Denise

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4 posted 10-28-1999 11:57 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

YOUR POEM IS ALL TOO TRUE. WISH MORE PEOPLE THOUGHT ALONG YOUR LINES.
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