»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #3
»
Bloody Paper..
| Open Poetry #3 |
|
Bloody Paper.. |
|
|
The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
its as he said it might be do we listen or are we too occupied with anarchy underneath the peaceful tree that worm is corrupting again soon eden will be gone.. all for what... the lust you need the bloody paper you desire more your constant wanting worshipping of the spotlight burns that tree that could grant us immortality last power you ever recieve what a murderer... we all would be.. to not stop this disease ------------------ |
||
| © Copyright 1999 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
interesting poem...may I ask, what exactly is the bloody paper? ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
||
|
The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
Money.. thanks for your replies ,appreciate it |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Jackal. Lots of thought in this! ------------------ Denise |
||
|
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
YOUR POEM IS ALL TOO TRUE. WISH MORE PEOPLE THOUGHT ALONG YOUR LINES. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||